First of This Month’s Thrillers: Wrong Time Wrong Place by Gillian McAllister
Wrong Time Wrong Place is an unusual, unique thriller. It’s fairly common for crime fiction to open with a murder – as in this case – and then to look back at the past to show what caused it. Gillian McAllister’s thriller is similar in that respect, but very unusual in how the past is presented. Jen – a happy married mother of a teenage boy – witnesses her son stab a man. She awakes the next morning to find it’s now the previous day, and the murder hasn’t yet happened. Each subsequent morning, she is at the start of an earlier day, going back years, each time “landing” at a time when there’s something she can learn to help understand why her son would murder someone. But can she use what she learns to prevent the crime taking place and stop her son being arrested?
This is not the kind of book I would normally pick up, but I was given it to read, so thought I should give it a try. Because the story hinges on someone going back in time, I would have dismissed it under other circumstances as too unrealistic to be worth considering. However, to my great surprise, this thriller amazingly came across as believable! The reason lies in how well the main character and her reaction are written. On the first morning, Jen is totally bewildered, scared, and confused, convinced she must have had a stroke or suffered some sort of brain damage. How she struggles to come to terms with it and grapples with how to react are what make it believable.
This crime thriller is a total page-turner, and I quickly became as desperate as Jen to find out why her son should act so out of character to stab a man to death.
As the story unfolds, Jen notices things about those around her that she didn’t spot before – little things that now make her suspicious of her husband, her son, her son’s girlfriend and her family, and others. Now, the second time through a day with the knowledge of what will happen in the future, she asks questions, probes, even spies on her family, and discovers more about them that she didn’t know. And who is this woman that her husband surreptitiously arranges to meet?
There’s a crime gang stealing cars, a criminal freshly released from prison, and characters with nearly impossible moral dilemmas to deal with. But once she learns the truth behind their behaviours, will anything ever be the same again?
So, don’t do like I was going to, and dismiss this thriller as too unrealistic to be worth a read. Like me, you might end up, not only surprised, but totally sucked into the story by the clever writing, and desperate to turn the next page to discover why her son should act so out of character and how Jen can break the cycle of waking up on an earlier day.
This Month’s Second Thriller: The Handler by M P Woodward
Iran’s attempt to create sufficient enriched uranium 235 for a nuclear bomb forms the core of this tense and exciting spy thriller that’s packed with loads of well-written action. The CIA has a mole inside the Iranian enrichment facility – Zana Rahimi, a very senior nuclear scientist. He views the Iranian rulers as deadly fanatics and is terrified that, once they have nuclear capability, they will unleash it on the world. Over the years, with CIA specialist help, he has introduced software bugs into the system that controls the centrifuges used in the enrichment process, preventing them from running at full efficiency. Now, though, due to an agreement with Russia, Russian specialists have arrived to help make Iran’s system work properly.
Rahimi realises it won’t be long before they uncover his interference, and he demands CIA help to get him and his wife out of Iran. But there’s a problem. He is so paranoid that he will only trust one man to get him out – an American agent he met at university – and Rahimi refuses to make any further software modifications for the CIA until that person contacts him with an escape plan.
That person is John Dale, a CIA operative who was at the university attempting to recruit foreign students for the Americans. The CIA creates a plan to exfiltrate Rahimi and his wife, and Dale is sent to make contact. However, things start to go wrong even before Dale sets off. Russian intelligence gathering detects that something is happening, and a small SVR team is ordered to find out more. The Iranians are tipped off, too, that they have a mole, and they start investigating. Rahimi, realising the noose is closing around him, is forced to run before he meets Dale, but the Iranians are close behind him.
The story involves in-fighting and friction between different departments in the Russian intelligence services, as well as political manoeuvrings between the Iranian security officer and his superior, both of whom want to ensure they will receive the glory if they find the traitor, but that the other will take the blame if the mission goes wrong.
John Dale’s handler is his ex-wife, and we also follow her attempts to keep the mission running. But there seems to be a leak to the Russians somewhere in her team, and she starts to be suspicious of her boss.
The thriller cuts between the viewpoints of all the characters involved. This adds to the tension, as we see how the different groups are trying to get one-up on the others, and the consequences on Rahimi’s attempt to escape. However, with so many people involved, it does sometimes become a little confusing who is who, and I did find myself referring to the helpful two-page list of characters that’s at the start of the book quite a few times.
The action continues fast and furious with only a few short breaks. As Dale prepares to enter Iran with both Russian and Iranian operatives on his tail, the plan starts to collapse around him. In the highly tense finale, he tries to rendezvous with Rahimi near the border as his enemies close in.
The Handler is one of the few books that made me lose track of time while glued to the action. It’s a very exciting thriller with action that’s realistic and broken by only a few tiny lulls in the first half. I’d highly recommend it as a tense espionage thriller with an incredible momentum that drives you frantically to an exciting conclusion.
This Month’s Third Thrillers: Take No More by Seb Kirby
I initially hesitated to recommend this thriller because the whole story relies on one massive coincidence, which made the plot feel forced. However, the book’s excellent pace and the way it made me keep turning the pages to find out what happened next persuaded me to include it. The short chapters and tight writing make the story tear along at a great pace. The book delivered a strong emotional punch, too, the characters being so well portrayed that I felt loads of sympathy for them because of what they were made to suffer.
The powerful Lando family has dominated Florence for many generations, virtually untouchable, and with many people in authority “in their pockets”. Alfieri Lando, the patriarch, is a megalomaniac without conscience, thinking of himself almost as a god. He is grooming his son, Matteo, to take over the family businesses when the time comes – illegal waste dumping, drugs, prostitution, etc. Most of all, Alfieri wants his son to develop a character that has no regard for others, i.e. to grow into his own image.
Alfieri’s wife, Alessa, has a love of art and has a huge collection of artworks. It is here that the story starts. Julia Blake is an ambitious art restorer with a theory that some of the world’s missing masterpieces might have been painted over to hide and protect them. For example, to prevent Nazis looting valuable paintings from the Jews during World War II, some may have been painted over to make them look like valueless amateur works, in the hope that the outer layer could be removed one day to restore the original. Julia has access to equipment that can scan paintings to reveal their individual paint layers, and hearing that Alessa has a huge collection of paintings, Julia flies to Florence to meet her. Julia persuades her to provide access to them for scanning, with the expectation that, if one of her paintings does turn out to be hiding a “lost” masterpiece, Alessa will gain a fortune. Julia starts her work at Alessa’s home, oblivious to the events taking place in the Lando family.
A week or so later, her husband, James Blake – the story’s protagonist – returns home to their London flat to find Julia in the kitchen, beaten to death. No one knows how she got there: she wasn’t expected to fly home for some time. James immediately becomes the police’s prime suspect and, in a mix of anger and frustration that they don’t seem to be looking elsewhere, he heads to Florence where his wife had been, intending to identify the killer and take revenge. With help from his brother, a documentary producer, and a friend of his brother who is an investigative journalist, James starts to unravel his wife’s final days.
The story chops between James’ attempt to find the killer, and the events in the week leading up to the murder from Julia’s viewpoint. As the book progresses, the sections following Julia gradually get closer to the current day until they merge with James’ investigations and we head towards the frightening final pages and the story’s satisfying conclusion.
As film listings sometimes warn, this thriller “contains some scenes of a sexual nature and drug use that some readers may find distressing.” However, it has to be said that those scenes are integral to the plot and written with minimal detail – just enough to make the reader feel uncomfortable about what is happening.
Take No More does teeter on the edge of believability at times, so this thriller can only be recommended if that isn’t a problem to you. In particular, the big coincidence that we learn about part way through, which is the catalyst for the whole plot, did not feel believable to me, but then, coincidences do happen in real life, don’t they?
From a Writer’s Desk
It’s not been a good time for my writing. So many other jobs have crowded in that my fiction writing didn’t get much of a look-in. To be honest with myself, though, that’s possibly a convenient excuse. In reality, what’s probably happened is that I stalled because I wasn’t entirely sure where to go with it next. In the work-in-progress thriller, Marcus Trevelyan has been in China for a few days and is now ready to take action. He has found the factory he’s been looking for and completed his surveillance. Now, it’s time to break in. In the novel’s plan, I knew what he had to do next, but my instincts were telling me something was missing. What was meant to happen was that he gets inside, kills the person he needs, sets the factory on fire, and escapes; but my subconscious kept telling me that was rather flat. Where’s the jeopardy? Where are the difficulties and obstacles? It needed more, and I think my gut feeling was acting like a brake that prevented me pushing ahead. When I finally realised that was what was happening, I started to brainstorm what could happen in the story: what could go wrong, what might not be what Marcus expected, what surprise obstacles might he face? From those scribblings, I’ve now selected the best bits and know what’s going to happen. I feel much happier about it now and think I’m ready to carry on.
As you can tell, I’m not the world’s fastest writer. Some authors manage to knock out a thriller every six months; I’m certainly not in that league and feel slightly envious of those who can do that. But, then, I have a lot of other commitments which mean I only get a couple of hours a day to write.
News from the Book World
We were very sad to hear that the great thriller writer Frederik Forsyth passed away on June 9th at the age of 86. He started writing when he was out of money, with no car and nowhere to live. In just 35 days, he wrote the thriller that was published as The Day of the Jackal. Forsyth had worked as a foreign correspondent and news reporter, largely covering wars in far-off counties, also apparently working for MI6 for twenty years. It was those experiences, and what he learnt from mercenaries whom he befriended while overseas, that taught him how wars and spying work in reality. That knowledge informed his thrillers. His other most famous novels include works such as The Fourth Protocol and The Odessa File.
Techie Snips
Earlier this year, Cambridge scientists revealed they had built what they referred to as a “solar powered reactor”. The machine uses energy from sunlight to convert CO2 from the air into a liquid fuel that could potentially be used to power cars and planes. It mimics nature’s photosynthesis process.
The World of Crime
AI-based facial recognition recently led to the arrest of a serial paedophile who had been on the run for 27 years. The Cheshire police found him in Thailand by using a website called PinEyes that crawls the web using facial recognition. It located the criminal from his 1997 mugshot in less than a minute! The AI came across photos from a 2019 retirement party in Phuket for someone called Peter Smith. There was a telltale pimple on his neck that the software noted, matching it with his police photo from years before. With that information, the police managed to trace the criminal’s movements and arrest him.
Peak at a Blog
Since the start of the year, numerous stats and survey results have emerged that all tell the same tale: fewer children are enjoying reading than ever before. This month’s blog looks at the reasons behind those figures, and sees what experts say are the benefits of reading. There’s a fascinating look, too, at what happens in childrens’ brains when they are being read-to.
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